tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post1020247638763789156..comments2023-06-06T12:58:59.365-04:00Comments on Sins of the Flash: HelloVL Sheridanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-88148064679565433082011-05-06T17:28:50.562-04:002011-05-06T17:28:50.562-04:00@Peter- She's completely baffeled at first tha...@Peter- She's completely baffeled at first that he'd call just to say 'hi', but ultimately is quite delighted and relieved that he has. I think it was a question of how close she was willing to let him get; it was a lot easier for her to let him get physically close, but was anxious about letting him become emotionally intimate.VL Sheridanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-37246466088079700282011-05-06T16:21:59.198-04:002011-05-06T16:21:59.198-04:00Nicely paced, very readable and believable voice. ...Nicely paced, very readable and believable voice. The opening is intriguing. And I understood what you intended (looking at the comment in response to Jae). The clue for me was her having to deal with his kindness. It makes her uncomfortable, but it is genuine.<br /><br />What was the question they hadn't resolved before he left? That's the one thing that nags me.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-51014565119736405812011-05-05T19:20:06.112-04:002011-05-05T19:20:06.112-04:00Sweet; I liked how you twisted it up at the end. L...Sweet; I liked how you twisted it up at the end. Lots of memories for me from this story.The Rusty Penhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10129094645968254034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-59418538331100527492011-05-05T12:04:36.627-04:002011-05-05T12:04:36.627-04:00A really intriguing story. There seems to be unce...A really intriguing story. There seems to be uncertainty on both sides, so it will probably take more episodes to find out how the cookie crumbles.Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-54964784612604521022011-05-05T12:00:35.487-04:002011-05-05T12:00:35.487-04:00@Jaerose-Interesting comment, I never envisioned h...@Jaerose-Interesting comment, I never envisioned him as the wolf, I thought of him as someone who was trying to help, but bad experiences from her past are making her keep her defenses up.VL Sheridanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-16454012260964878442011-05-05T10:54:39.798-04:002011-05-05T10:54:39.798-04:00You had me hooked and going down a totally differe...You had me hooked and going down a totally different road! I love the shift and how it ended.<br />Well done :)Renhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16707254869085913114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-48690402635909821942011-05-05T08:13:01.081-04:002011-05-05T08:13:01.081-04:00Isn't it amazing how one person can change eve...Isn't it amazing how one person can change everything? I like the edginess at the beginning and the image of her kicking her shoes off at the end.Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-7751625693713796352011-05-05T07:43:11.212-04:002011-05-05T07:43:11.212-04:00What a shift..those opening thoughts screamed of a...What a shift..those opening thoughts screamed of a woman in trouble..sitting alone..trying to figure things out..trying to keep it together..or appearing to..and then the call..was she talking to the wolf..is he safe.. is he looking out for her..I felt more easy when she kicked her shoes off..but still, part of me is glad he is only on the phone and she can choose to let him in or not..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-89780407247248830432011-05-05T06:28:22.692-04:002011-05-05T06:28:22.692-04:00There is so much to read in this riveting story, e...There is so much to read in this riveting story, especially with your preamble. My mind was weighing up all the possibilities. Beautiful and intriguing writing.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-47439481189322495472011-05-05T04:00:04.139-04:002011-05-05T04:00:04.139-04:00Wonderful writing. I felt the tensions and the und...Wonderful writing. I felt the tensions and the undercurrants, I could sense all of the unspoken things. So very well done! I really enjoyed it. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-30480562475238373692011-05-04T18:50:50.996-04:002011-05-04T18:50:50.996-04:00Aw he called he still misses her loves her.Aw he called he still misses her loves her.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-66057516873796324672011-05-04T17:37:44.319-04:002011-05-04T17:37:44.319-04:00Lovely story... I felt the tension throughout and ...Lovely story... I felt the tension throughout and relaxation in the end!<br /><br />~laurieLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-50379796634884947762011-05-04T17:31:12.021-04:002011-05-04T17:31:12.021-04:00Oh... this ended in a way that pleased me, but I w...Oh... this ended in a way that pleased me, but I was feeling apprehension from beginning to end. Well constructed!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-81963700549840541442011-05-04T16:04:45.462-04:002011-05-04T16:04:45.462-04:00This drew me in quickly and kept me reading. The ...This drew me in quickly and kept me reading. The dialogue captured far more emotions than the words themselves. Nicely done.<br /><br />My 3WW: <a href="http://grandmas-goulash.info/2011/04/the-inheritance-a-strange-partnership/" rel="nofollow">A Strange Partnership</a>Grandma's Goulashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02650355088038245450noreply@blogger.com