tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post3017307248303235376..comments2023-06-06T12:58:59.365-04:00Comments on Sins of the Flash: The ChoiceVL Sheridanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-37700560213951419132010-09-16T13:10:53.936-04:002010-09-16T13:10:53.936-04:00Terrible and true and well done!Terrible and true and well done!asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-36277315455873321232010-09-16T02:56:41.145-04:002010-09-16T02:56:41.145-04:00So well written, you captured the feeling perfectl...So well written, you captured the feeling perfectly!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-54163200108797754922010-09-15T22:43:40.971-04:002010-09-15T22:43:40.971-04:00Oh! A sad but realistic 'slice of life' st...Oh! A sad but realistic 'slice of life' story. The last line was especially touching. All three of the protagonists are hurting in their own ways.Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10275276379009334446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-74670483159925952802010-09-15T20:33:09.655-04:002010-09-15T20:33:09.655-04:00Oh yes, I relate to this, too. You write so compe...Oh yes, I relate to this, too. You write so compellingly about a difficult, tension-ridden situation, and my heart goes out to all your characters. Each person is between the proverbial rock and hard place. The adults involved will need almost superhuman amounts of patience, understanding, and maturity.Thomma Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12490964079393282131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-43612097103737564492010-09-15T17:39:54.778-04:002010-09-15T17:39:54.778-04:00Thanks guys. I'm not all that thrilled with t...Thanks guys. I'm not all that thrilled with the title; I don't think it conveys the heart rending pull between his needs as a man and his obligations as a parent. Will sleep on it.VL Sheridanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-87203924367657208662010-09-15T15:40:12.379-04:002010-09-15T15:40:12.379-04:00I will echo a thought posted already, that the ten...I will echo a thought posted already, that the tension you create are just super. Gripping until the last word. I've been in this situation and it feels awful. Great piece, strongly written and (sadly, I think) a scene that many of us these days can relate to.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-41995165433245367792010-09-15T14:10:08.698-04:002010-09-15T14:10:08.698-04:00Your stories seem to always have such unbearable t...Your stories seem to always have such unbearable tension, like rubber bands about to snap. This one, perhaps even more so. Great work.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-15704066349273215932010-09-15T13:46:29.339-04:002010-09-15T13:46:29.339-04:00I have been thrown out of the house by a young boy...I have been thrown out of the house by a young boy who just hated the idea that I might take his father's place.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1206208789010061948.post-59073665530669434982010-09-15T13:30:50.153-04:002010-09-15T13:30:50.153-04:00I really enjoyed this, you captured the dynamics s...I really enjoyed this, you captured the dynamics so well and made me smile with 'she has a big ass'. Nice writing1 :-)<br /><br /><a href="http://panopticulated.blogspot.com/2010/09/individuality-three-word-wednesday.html" rel="nofollow">My 3WW</a>Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.com