Wednesday, August 3, 2011

PHHHHFFFF



It would appear

That a dose of reality

Won't always pierce

The cotton headed ninny muggins

Amongst us.

He doesn't love you

Really means

HE DOESN'T LOVE YOU.

Not

He's playing hard to get.

Or

He's unable to express

How he really feels.

Because

He's been hurt

Or

Betrayed

Or

Had a rotten childhood.

He doesn't love you

Means

It's time

To let go

Of

Him.

And begin to

Embrace

Yourself.

8 comments:

  1. Yep, wake up and smell the coffee now
    cold and milky pale.

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  2. so true I agree with Cynthia yep wake up and smell the coffee they don't change what you see is what you get.

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  3. Breaking up is hard to do, hard to admit and it hurts, that is why we try to avoid it only to be hurt even more. Been there got the medal. All our hopes blown away like dandelion seeds. Great piece!

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  4. 'ninny muggins'..what a wonderful phrase..and a playful piece..no is hard to swallow at times..but it helps if it's washed down by strong cup of coffee..Jae

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  5. Great stuff, as always. Really like the structure as well.

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  6. Oh this is perfect! Given the upheaval of the last week, this fits in perfectly with what I was trying to tell my daughter.
    Great use of the prompts :)

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  7. love your story telling skills.


    http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/2011/08/thursday-short-story-slam-week-7.html



    hope to see you join us today.

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